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优化英语句子四种常用方法.doc添加时间:2024-02-28
优化英语句子的四种常用方法
近几年广东高考基础写作命题形式以文字提纲的形式出现。它的特点就是所给材料含有的信息比较多,但写作要求是只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。单一地用某种句型,文章就显得平淡乏味。如果在这五句话中所包含的句子结构能做到多样,那么,这篇文章显得就很漂亮了。
要让一篇文章的句式多样,其实并不难。在写作时,我们常用到的有以下几种方法:
一、运用同位语
此方法常用于介绍人或事物。
[例1]李敏是个女孩子,今年18岁, 她在光华中学学习,她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。
[一般]Li Ming is a girl. She is 18. She is my neighbour and my best friend. She is studying in Guanghua Middle School.
[高级]Li Ming, a girl of 18, my neighbour and my best friend, is studying in Guanghua Middle School.
[运用]用同位法整合下面的句子。
1. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. It is the cultural and economical center of Guangdong Province.
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2. Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Hunan Normal University last year.
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二、运用并列句
常用的并列连词有and, but, or, otherwise, nor, so, yet, however, for, as well as, both...and, not only...but also, either...or, neither...nor, (and)then, since等。
[例2]他不喜欢音乐,也不喜欢运动。
[一般]He doesn’t like music. He doesn’t like sports, either.
[高级]He likes neither music nor sports.
[例3]我不喜欢他,他很自私。
[一般]I don’t like him. He is selfish.
[高级]I don’t like him, for he is selfish.
[运用]用连接词整合下列句子。
3. He works hard himself. He encourages us to work hard, too.
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4. These glasses are very expensive. Please be careful with them.
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三、运用短语
根据具体情况我们可以用现在分词、过去分词,介词短语、不定式短语等。
[例4]我很惊讶,一切进展得那么顺利。
[一般]I was surprised. Everything went on very well.
[高级]To my surprise, everything went on well.
[例5]她回到舞厅。他寻找丢失的项链。
[一般]She went back. She wanted to find her lost necklace.
[高级]She went back to find her lost necklace.
[例6]故事是用简单的英语写的,很受英语初学者的欢迎。
[一般]The stories are written in simple Englis